Post by samazoth on Apr 27, 2011 20:46:50 GMT -5
I have a few stories on fanfiction.net, but this is a oneshot I did.. What do you think?
A/N:: I like the idea of insanity... Like I wouldn't want to be insane, but its interesting none the less. I think that Ed is partially insane... and the plot of this one-shot was born. I do not own Fullmetal Alchemist
"Brother!" Al sang, running to hug me. I grab him and swing around, "You're body! You got it back! You're back to normal!" I laughed as I ruffled his hair. "All thanks to you! I love you brother..." I smile and look back at him. "I have total faith in you brother... You could never hurt me." I see the Gate open and the hands start to rip his body to shreds. I scream his name but what comes back is a tearful, "You did this to me brother..." I bang at the door, but all they do is laugh... a deep throaty laugh that shakes my entire being. I close my eyes and a hand grabs my shoulder. "Mom?" I ask. "My little man. I was wondering where you were..." Her beautiful features slowly start to melt and form horrible shapes, "You ruined everything, Edward... How could you kill your own brother and burn your home? Mother is upset..." She tightens her grip. I wince and open my eyes again. Hughes is holding Nina's hand. "Does the killing ever stop, Ed? Who's life and family are you going to destroy next?" A flash and Hughes falls over, blood flowing from his eyes like tears. Nina is transformed into a Chimera, "Big brother, will you play with me?" I shake and back away, she stalks closer then a hand reaches out from behind me, exploding the four year old into a bloody mess. I scream and turn around. Scar is standing behind me. "It is your time to die... You must pay for the sins that you have committed..." He reaches for my face and the fear of God invades my brain. I have to run, have to escape... a door! I scramble towards it. Envy stands in front, blocking my path. "You just keep running, Fullmetal Pipsqueek. You can never face your sins..." He twists his shape into Mom. "Now it is time you atoned for your actions..." I push past him and head into the door. I slam it shut, leaning against it, trying to catch my breath. "And then there was one." I turn around and I am standing staring at myself. The other me smiles dementedly and walks closer. "You are a failure and have always been a burden to those around you. You should have died. Not Mom... not Alphonse... Dad did right when he left you." I started to tear up. No.. this is wrong... make it stop. A suit of armor walked puppet-like towards me, holding me down. The other me screamed, "You are worthless! You will never save Al! You don't deserve to live!" Reflection me turns his hand into a sword and starts to lash my face and body. I scream in pain. "This is for all the pain you have cause others, you miserable excuse for a man!" "Make it stop!" I scream and everything goes blank. I am standing back in front of the door, it creaks open. There is a way to set things right... I walk towards the door, "How?" You must die. I feel the arms grab me and I get pulled into the gate. My eyes burn as the Truth burns itself into my retinas. Things go white again and... "Brother!" Al sang, running to hug me. I grab him and swing around, "You're body! You got it back! You're back to normal!" I laughed as I ruffled his hair. "All thanks to you! I love you brother..." I smile and look back at him. "I have total faith in you brother... You could never hurt me." I see the Gate open and the hands start to rip his body to shreds. I scream his name but what comes back is a tearful, "You did this to me brother..." I bang at the door, but all they do is laugh... a deep throaty laugh that shakes my entire being. I close my eyes and a hand grabs my shoulder...
"Ed, wake up." I jump, startled by Al's voice. "We're here. We're at Central." I look out the window and stretch my arms. "Finally," I yawn back.
A/N:: I like the idea of insanity... Like I wouldn't want to be insane, but its interesting none the less. I think that Ed is partially insane... and the plot of this one-shot was born. I do not own Fullmetal Alchemist
"Brother!" Al sang, running to hug me. I grab him and swing around, "You're body! You got it back! You're back to normal!" I laughed as I ruffled his hair. "All thanks to you! I love you brother..." I smile and look back at him. "I have total faith in you brother... You could never hurt me." I see the Gate open and the hands start to rip his body to shreds. I scream his name but what comes back is a tearful, "You did this to me brother..." I bang at the door, but all they do is laugh... a deep throaty laugh that shakes my entire being. I close my eyes and a hand grabs my shoulder. "Mom?" I ask. "My little man. I was wondering where you were..." Her beautiful features slowly start to melt and form horrible shapes, "You ruined everything, Edward... How could you kill your own brother and burn your home? Mother is upset..." She tightens her grip. I wince and open my eyes again. Hughes is holding Nina's hand. "Does the killing ever stop, Ed? Who's life and family are you going to destroy next?" A flash and Hughes falls over, blood flowing from his eyes like tears. Nina is transformed into a Chimera, "Big brother, will you play with me?" I shake and back away, she stalks closer then a hand reaches out from behind me, exploding the four year old into a bloody mess. I scream and turn around. Scar is standing behind me. "It is your time to die... You must pay for the sins that you have committed..." He reaches for my face and the fear of God invades my brain. I have to run, have to escape... a door! I scramble towards it. Envy stands in front, blocking my path. "You just keep running, Fullmetal Pipsqueek. You can never face your sins..." He twists his shape into Mom. "Now it is time you atoned for your actions..." I push past him and head into the door. I slam it shut, leaning against it, trying to catch my breath. "And then there was one." I turn around and I am standing staring at myself. The other me smiles dementedly and walks closer. "You are a failure and have always been a burden to those around you. You should have died. Not Mom... not Alphonse... Dad did right when he left you." I started to tear up. No.. this is wrong... make it stop. A suit of armor walked puppet-like towards me, holding me down. The other me screamed, "You are worthless! You will never save Al! You don't deserve to live!" Reflection me turns his hand into a sword and starts to lash my face and body. I scream in pain. "This is for all the pain you have cause others, you miserable excuse for a man!" "Make it stop!" I scream and everything goes blank. I am standing back in front of the door, it creaks open. There is a way to set things right... I walk towards the door, "How?" You must die. I feel the arms grab me and I get pulled into the gate. My eyes burn as the Truth burns itself into my retinas. Things go white again and... "Brother!" Al sang, running to hug me. I grab him and swing around, "You're body! You got it back! You're back to normal!" I laughed as I ruffled his hair. "All thanks to you! I love you brother..." I smile and look back at him. "I have total faith in you brother... You could never hurt me." I see the Gate open and the hands start to rip his body to shreds. I scream his name but what comes back is a tearful, "You did this to me brother..." I bang at the door, but all they do is laugh... a deep throaty laugh that shakes my entire being. I close my eyes and a hand grabs my shoulder...
"Ed, wake up." I jump, startled by Al's voice. "We're here. We're at Central." I look out the window and stretch my arms. "Finally," I yawn back.