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claire409 Leuteniant First Class Loyal Soldier Da na na![A1i:6][A1i:6] Posts: 437	Review a story? Mar 21, 2011 21:34:37 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by claire409 on Mar 21, 2011 21:34:37 GMT -5 If you have time can you please go review my story for the "Tea and Ice cream" prompt? It would be greatly appreciated!
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Review a story? Mar 22, 2011 13:07:49 GMT -5

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Post by Faith Altoire on Mar 22, 2011 13:07:49 GMT -5

A review for Claire's "Tea and Icecream" prompt submission by Faith:

I really enjoyed to plot of this entry, a flirty waitress giving Edward her digits in ice-cream made me laugh. My only criticism maybe a few grammer issues, and perhaps a bit more detailing, other than that I enjoyed reading it.

"Whenever you have eliminated the impossible, whatever is left, no matter how improbable, must be true." -Sherlock Holmes
"I'm not small, I just live in a big world."
"Coincidence is a myth my friend, what lies ahead is only inevitability."-Fai D. Flourite
"If we can't protect the earth, we'll be damn sure to avenge it."- Tony Stark
"I really am just a madman in a box."-The Eleventh Doctor

claire409 Leuteniant First Class Loyal Soldier Da na na![A1i:6][A1i:6] Posts: 437	Review a story? Mar 22, 2011 23:27:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by claire409 on Mar 22, 2011 23:27:16 GMT -5 Thank you! And yes, I do need to work on details but alas... laziness takes over... XD
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